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Could u edit these paragraphs. Check if everything makes sense Thank u 6. I am very open to ideas or influences to inspire myself to be an architect. I do appreciate many architects work and value how we the students can take them as role model to our future careers. I always been liked the modern architecture and unique structures. I believe we can broke rules in Architecture, but not to dare the impossible. For these reason, I admire Frank Gehry’s work because he had broken rules with his unique designs. This architect had influenced me even more to pursue architecture. 7. I feel motivated about that once I have finished my career, I will be able to solve design problems by myself or in a team with other people who will be sharing the same interests than me. Also, I feel motivated to see one day one of my designs built in real life, to say: I designed this! I think it’s a very special moment when an architect completes his or her first project. Because she or he saw the process, the drawings and the trophy obviously will be the building.
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- 6. I appreciate the work of many architects, and believe that students can use them as role models for their own careers. I like modern architecture as well as unique structures, and believe that we can break the rules as long as we don't try to do the impossible. I admire Frank Gehry's work because he broke the rules with his unique designs. His work is a major reason for my interest in this subject. 7. I belive that I will one day be able to solve design problems by myself, or as part of a team of people who share my interests. I would like for one of my designs to actually be built, and, when this happens, my trophy would be that finished product.
- 6. I am very open to ideas or influences to inspire myself to be an architect. I do appreciate many architects work and values how we the students can take them as a role model to our future careers. I have always liked the modern architecture and unique structures. I believe we can break rules in Architecture, but not to dare the impossible. For these reason, I admire Frank Gehry’s work because he had broken rules with his unique designs. This architect had influenced me even more to pursue architecture. 7. I feel motivated, once I finish my career, I will be able to solve design problems by myself or with a team who will be sharing the same interests with me. Also, I feel motivated to see that one day one of my designs will be built in real life, and say: I designed this! I think it’s a very special moment when an architect completes his or her first project. Because she or he will see the progress, the drawings and the trophy obviously will be the building.
- The key to good writing is to use as few words as possible to say what you mean. So here are some possible revisions for your passages. 6. I have always appreciated unique structures, because they show that in architecture we can break the rules. In fact, it is Frank Gehry's unique designs that have most influenced me to pursue architecture. I am, however, receptive to other ideas and influences that may further inspire me. 7. I believe that once I begin my career, I will be prepared to solve design problems on my own and within group projects. The desire to see the construction of my designs is what motivates me. The completion of an architect's first project is a very special moment that I am eager to achieve. I imagine it will be a great feeling to look at a structure one day and say, "I designed this!"
