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The Architecture has had tremendous changes across the time. All the structures that we see today have an influence from classical Architecture left by Romans and Greeks who created the most important construction techniques. They created logical techniques and implement common sense to convey amazing buildings to historical, social and cultural purposes. We can easily compare structures of that time with ones on our current era. Studying deeply these structures, we can notice that classical techniques are present in our modern structures with the different that technology plays an important role to facility development of Architecture.

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1. The Architecture has had tremendous changes across the time. All the structures that we see today have an influence from classical Architecture left by Romans and also the Greeks who created the most important construction techniques. They created logical techniques and implement common sense to convey amazing buildings to historical, social and cultural purposes, these wonderful well jnown sturctures have a significant meaning to them. We can easily compare structures of that time with ones on our current era. Studying deeply these structures, we can notice that classical techniques are present in our modern structures with the different that technology plays an important role to facility development of Architecture.
2. I'd do it like this: Throughout time, architecture has undergone tremendous changes. All the structures that we see today have an influence; from classical architecture, left by the Romans and Greeks who created the most important construction techniques. They created logical methods and implemented common sense to convey amazing buildings to historical, social and cultural purposes. We can easily compare structures of that time with ones on our current era. While studying deeply about these structures, we can notice that classical techniques are present in our modern structures and that technology plays an important role to facility development of Architecture.
3. Here is how it should have been written : The Architecture has had tremendous changes across time. All the structures that we see today have an influence from classical Architecture left behind by Romans and Greeks who invented the most important construction techniques. They created logical techniques and implemented common sense to convey amazing buildings to historical, social and cultural purposes. We can easily compare structures of that time with ones of our current era. Studying these structures deeply, we can notice that classical techniques are present in our modern structures with the difference that technology plays an important role to facilitate development of Architecture.
4. Some of this paragraph actually seems a bit jumbled, but since I don't know what the rest of the paper looks like, I corrected it as is. Hope this helps you out! Architecture has changed tremendously throughout time. Nearly all of the structures that we see today have been influenced by the classical architecture of the Romans and Greeks, who are credited with creating the most important construction techniques. Those groups created logical techniques and implemented the use of common sense to construct amazing buildings . These buildings have had significant effects on history, society and culture. We can easily compare the structures of the Romans and Greeks with those in our modern era. By deeply studying these creations, we are able to note that those classical techniques are present in our modern buildings. Technology has been able to play an important role in the development of architecture, even since the age of the Greeks and Romans.