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2. Circle design The design concept is embodied to extend extensive ranges from contemporary to modern classic. 3. Square design In the past, the edge of square is much sharper compared to current design. Currently, we soften the square by combing culture cultivation and belief. We believe the development of architecture history in square shape would be similar to square faucets style. For instant, just like the synergy of British Edwardian architecture and Spanish Victoria architecture. Here, we also would like to demonstrate this brand new square faucet, Frank, the direction of its water flow is unique from normal faucet. This design consideration can reduce the chance of water splash on users while it’s easy to operate. 4 Curve design Curve is not absolute straight, but it is a line that bends smoothly and regularly from being straight. The existence of curve is caused by the changes of nature environment as lives need to follow the nature rule to survive, like tree trunks bend in different angles. In the pervious years, the products representing curve were focusing on classic style. Such as the typical products, England swan double-handle faucet and south Europe chrome gold single-handle faucet. This year, we would like to demonstrate modern and contemporary styles.

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1. 2. Circle design This design concept embodied extensive ranges from contemporary to modern classic. 3. Square design In the past, the edge of square was much sharper compared to its current design. Currently, we soften the square by combining culture and belief. We believe the development of the square shape in architectural history would be similar to a square faucet's style. Our vision is similar to the synergy of British Edwardian architecture and Spanish Victoria architecture. We also would like to demonstrate this brand new square faucet, Frank, with its unique directional water flow. This design takes into consideration the reduction of water splash on users while being easy to operate. 4. Curve design Curve is a line that bends smoothly and regularly rather than being straight. The existence of curve is caused by the changes of a natural environment, as lives need to follow the nature rule to survive. This should feel organic like tree trunks bending in different angles. In the previous years, the products representing curve were focusing on a classic style such as the England swan double-handle faucet and south European chrome gold single-handle faucet. This year we would like to demonstrate modern and contemporary styles.
2. please answer the following so that i can help you revise your piece: 1. what is this writing for? is it a part of an advertisement, or is it an essay for a class? 2. i'm not sure if you should use the first person plural "we." if might be best to keep it neutral without any "we" involved. i like how it sounds, but it might not be appropriate. why are you saying, "we think this" and "we think that?" 3. are there more sentences for paragraph 2? if no, you need to add detail about the circle design's influence on architecture. 4. is "frank" the british-edwardian/spanish-victorian type of square faucet? 5. is "frank" the actual name of the facet design? is it a modern design or is it an older design? 6. when you talk about "culture, cultivation, and belief" what does that mean? exaplin each and how they are related to the design of architecture. what i understand form this is: faucet shapes have evolved throughout history, and you are explaining how these facet shapes have come about. you are also giving examples of these differnt faucets. am i right? answer these q's so i can help you further revise your writing.
3. 2.Circle Design The design concept is embodied to extend extensive ranges from contemporary to modern classic. (already right) 3.Square design In the past, the edge of a square was much sharper compared to current design. Currently, we soften the square by combining culture, cultivation, and belief. We believe the development of architectural history of square shape would be similar to square faucets' style, for instance, just like the synergy of British Edwardian architecture and Spanish Victorian architecture. Here, we also would like to demonstrate this brand new square faucet, Frank. The direction of its water flow is unique from normal faucets. This design consideration can reduce the chance of water splashing on users, while it's easy to operate. 4. Curve design A curve is not absolutely straight, but it is a line that bends smoothly and regularly from being straight. The existence of a curve is caused by the changes of nature environment as lives need to follow the nature to survive, like tree trunks bending in different angles. In the previous years, the products representing curve were focusing on classic style such as the typical products, England swan double- handle faucet. This year, we would like to demonstrate modern and contemporary styles.